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Why did you delete the one with Balto and the Grey Husky? I
liked it!
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I can help with that if you want. I took a college course on writing, so I know a few tricks. |
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sorry I will wright betters then
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Wolf --> Whoa, whoa, whoa. I never said ALL your fics were bad. Most of them I liked, a lot! You've been on my favorites list for a long time! |
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God Hates Balto's Life this is my only fanFiction right now sence my fanfictions suck. I may finnish this and turn it to a song and send it here in fan music! |
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God Hates Balto's Life this is my only fanFiction right now sence my fanfictions suck. I may finnish this and turn it to a song and send it here in fan music! |
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ok I suck!
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wolf --> Sorry if I took so long to reply. to answer your question, the story was pretty badly written. The plot made no sense and was, quite bluntly, ill-planned and not the least bit challenging. Virtually every fanfic I've ever seen that had Balto or Jenna cheating came straight from a cookie-cutter, and frankly this one's the most common shape of them all. No background, no creativity, and a bare minimum of thought. I'd offer contructive criticism, but frankly I can tell you right off the bat that this one's got no real potential for anything even halfway decent. You'd honestly be better off deleting it. |
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sorry if I rushed it the sequa;l will be much better |
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God Hates Balto's Life I made it up |
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