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Love Can Kill ::: Part 1 It was kewl! You're in my faves. |
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yay! i luv your story!!! |
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balto1423, October 11, 2007 at 00: 23
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your stories are awsome i put u on my favorites
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Revenge Kills Part 2 I agree with lone wolf and dragon tamer. Especially opn the 'revenge kills' books. People may have talent but it's THEIR choice on what they do with it. |
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Jeeze, I couldn't even READ this one it was so packed together! Please use the "Enter" key a little more often, OK? |
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I'm with Lone Wolf_fanwriter on these, especially "Revenge kills" and its sequel. Under the rules of the site they may not be bad enough for deletion, but writing stuff like this is a sad waste of talent. YOUR talent. When you write like this, you aren't doing yourself oryour readers any favors whatsoever. |
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good stories but work a little more on the text so you know who it's talking and so on and so on and don't take it wrong it's just a tip |
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You're a talented writer, but I feel you're not putting that to good use... Make a new paragraph at the begining and end of each conversation and with each change of speaker. And for pity's sake use puncutation and quotation marks. Keep trying. -LWf |
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HILLARIOUS!!!!!!!!!! |
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they are all hilarious |
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