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Poor pups, how are they going to survve their loss? how's Achak going to survive? Great story tho. There were a few moments where I got deja-vu, but that's just me.Come to think of it...i'm having deja-vu a lot these past few weeks now...but great story! I can't wait for the next story!! * jumps up and down like a little pup* XD |
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dramah8r10, November 04, 2008 at 00: 04
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The Brown Hill Spirits (part 9) OMG!! kiona waz my fav character! it breaks my heart to read those last lines! plz plz PLZ! make a better ending! |
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The Drifter, November 03, 2008 at 17: 42
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The Brown Hill Spirits (part 9) I'm shocked. I can't say anything else but... I'm shocked. I'm
sure you have a very good reason for doing this, so I won't bend your
ear raving about it, but that was as if a cold arctic blast had shook
me to my very core. Please continue with your story soon so that we
can see what happens in the end. Thank you. |
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The Brown Hill Spirits (part 9) Kiona! NOOOO!!! When I read the last few lines, I literally
started to cry! Catwhohas14tails and Draco, there had better be an
awesome ending to this! Still, it's an unexpected twist, which I must
admit is rather a jaw-dropper.
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The Brown Hill Spirits (part 9) WP--> The story's not over yet ;D |
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NOOOOO!!!! javascript:setsmiley(' ') Kiona! When I read the last few
lines, about them saying Goodbye, I felt a teardrop on my
cheek.javascript:setsmiley(' ') It's way too sad. Cat, there had
better be an awesome sequel to this!javascript:setsmiley(' ')
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The Brown Hill Spirits (part 9) Kiona's DEAD?? Not to be offensive, but I seriously can't believe you did that. Still a very well-written fan fiction. |
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The Brown Hill Spirits (part 9) Aww poor Kiona... if she's gone, I wonder if Achak will approve of Hokee. UK--> That's why it's best not to read the comments before the story |
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The Brown Hill Spirits (part 9) Oh, that was sad; Kiona died. She died a hero though.
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The Brown Hill Spirits (part 9) Why did you have to kill Kiona!!! She was my fav character Still a
great fanfic and probably the best series
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