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Cogitor, April 25, 2008 at 23: 54
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The Black Branch (ToS ending no. 4) *Spoiler Alert - Review may include spoilers to make it more aerodynamic* Okay, your premise was original - everyone dies. The way you wrote it down was also pretty good, although a bit short. I didn't really got Kovu's reasoning, though. He was pretty decisive in his actions right after the tragedy, but then seems to lose focus. That you shortly hinted at how Dhalimu would develop in the future was a good move to end with, maybe even a (minimal) improvement over the original version. |
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The Black Branch (ToS ending no. 4) It's pretty good keep up the good work.
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Uh... could anyone leave a review, please? |
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